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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Do these senteces flow and are they clear?

Are these two sentences completely correct and flow good? (Huma is the young knight) : As a result of this suspicion, Avondale held Huma for a time until the knight disappeared into some ruins near the Ergothian camp. While Huma departed with the wizard Magius to continue his secret journey in search of a mysterious weapon that had been promised by Paladine, Avondale and his soldiers destroyed the sect of Morgion that had its base within the ruins during their hunt for the young knight.
  

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