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Rayman55 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Do these make sense?

Do these sentences make sense?

During the event, the guest speakers will explore the topics of customer service, business development and much more!

Topics to be explored include customer service, business development and much more!

If they don't make sense, how could I rewrite them so that "and much more" is included?

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Rayman55 Do these sentences make sense? They both seem fine.

— Mister Micawber

  • Rayman55 Do these sentences make sense?
  • They both seem fine.
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Rayman55Do these sentences make sense?
They both seem fine.
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Thanks. I think the confusion came from my thinking "Topic of customer service, topic of business development and topic of much more" (topic of much more doesn't make much sense).
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Rayman55 I think the confusion came from my thinking "Topic of customer service, topic of business development and topic of much more" (topic of much more doesn't make much sense).
That's a subtlety that would be overlooked by your readers: simplicity above all. Don't complicate it.
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Thanks. A subtlety? Are you saying that it doesn't make sense, but readers won't notice?
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Rayman55A subtlety? Are you saying that it doesn't make sense, but readers won't notice?
No, it makes good sense. Your dissection of the logic is the unnoticed subtlety.
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