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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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The gentle whisper of falling colourful leaves...
Pine cones, chestnuts, acorns under my feet...
The weak sun rays, smoothly touching my face...
All these things make my soul feel blissful peace.
Pine cones, chestnuts, acorns under my feet...
The weak sun rays, smoothly touching my face...
All these things make my soul feel blissful peace.
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Don't abuse ellipses. The gentle whisper of colourful falling leaves, Pine cones, chestnuts, acorns beneath my feet, The weak sun's rays, smoothly touching my face— All these make my soul feel blissful peace.
- Don't abuse ellipses.
- The gentle whisper of colourful falling leaves, Pine cones, chestnuts, acorns beneath my feet, The weak sun's rays, smoothly touching my face— All these make my soul feel blissful peace.
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Don't abuse ellipses.
The gentle whisper of colourful falling leaves,
Pine cones, chestnuts, acorns beneath my feet,
The weak sun's rays, smoothly touching my face—
All these make my soul feel blissful peace.
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