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0my essay on olevel topic is "we were ammazed to find how lucky john had been ''i want u to check it and mark it.02br
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00''today's latest news!An earth quake occured today in the district of northern areas of pakistan. it was estimated that its magnitude was of 7.6 degree and a district name muzzafrabad is effected by it too much ''a newscaster telecasted a recent news on the radio which allmost strucked us like terror.02br
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00''the communitation facilites were disconnected due to it and the transportation ways were also destroyed. Many roads were severely damaged.''she informed02br
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00a dark image almost made us all as black as dead.01i00John he is in muzzafrabad, yesterday was his flight02i00emily my sister shouted at the top of her voice. we all gazed her in horror although we allready knew about John's plans but it was still just unbelieveable.02br
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00I was totally blank, and couldnot think of any thing at that time. I could not control the thoughts of those bad thinking about John still i prayed, he is fine.02br
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00atlast we all friends took a decision to go there by air , because we were worried for our belooved friend02br
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00the time we reached there,we had to accept the truth that the disaster's effect was twenty five percent worse then what they showed or television. Innocent lives were the victims of such a devilastic disaster. so much damage gave us more confidence and courage to control our patience.02br
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00we were too much worried for John that even we forgot about poor Irene. peter ,my peter her brobter was trying to console her Although John ment much for us but he was Irene's life. we just hoped if he was fine .02br
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00John was a doctor , he was going to muzzafrabad for inspection of people's health , who did know that his death was calling him there. Athough we were not able to bring that bad feeling about John disappearance but the circumstances wanted us to believe on the unbelieveable truth the john is nomore between us.02br
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00we stayed there for a week and at last decided to leave as no hook n corner was left unexplored by us.On the socalled air port from where the helicoptor was about to take off we saw a long tail of doctors passing by.02br
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00'' I wish Jony also here''irene wished in a desprate voice. i rapped my arms around irene to console her. Even i wanted to cry of sorrow. suddenly some thing unusuable caught my sight.I saw peter looking at some thing above my sholder a distant object . His creosity suddenly changed to shockness.02br
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00''what happened peter .'' i asked 02br
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00he pointed his finger at some thing at my back, i spined to see and a tear of joy came out of my eye02br
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01i00jonny02i00 irene shouted and ran in top speed to her jonny they hugged each other as if for a long timre they havenot seen each other.02br
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00i wipped my tears and slapped joyfully at john's back01i00so mr crazy cant u even inform us that you are okay02i02br
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00he passed a big goofy grin and told that because of an emengency patient he had to delay his flight.02br
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00wipping my tears away i hugged John and looked up at the sky 02br
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00there is some one how help in every problem. i thanked him fopor returning my best friend my Johnny back to me0-