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Antonija Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Do some good
Hello,
I'm looking for a better expression than the one I have underlined.
Your stay at our fully equipped contemporary villa and early morning chirping of birds will definitely do some good for your body and soul.
Thank you very much.
Antonija
I'm looking for a better expression than the one I have underlined.
Your stay at our fully equipped contemporary villa and early morning chirping of birds will definitely do some good for your body and soul.
Thank you very much.
Antonija
Top answer
Your stay at our fully equipped contemporary villa with its dawn chorus of birds will heal your body and soul.
- Your stay at our fully equipped contemporary villa with its dawn chorus of birds will heal your body and soul.
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Your stay at our fully equipped contemporary villa with its dawn chorus of birds will heal your body and soul.
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For me, the early morning chirping of birds would drive me crazy, so I'm going to decline a stay at your fully-equipped villa.
That said, you've got bigger problems than the underlined part. First of all, your first clause doesn't have a verb. Secondly, "fully equipped" is something you say about a car or a kitchen, not hotel rooms. English has an informal locution "do your X good," as
That said, you've got bigger problems than the underlined part. First of all, your first clause doesn't have a verb. Secondly, "fully equipped" is something you say about a car or a kitchen, not hotel rooms. English has an informal locution "do your X good," as
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deadrat First of all, your first clause doesn't have a verb.What I think you are calling the first clause seems to me to be the subject of the verb.
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You are absolutely correct. I misread the sentence, which in itself is a good reason to adopt your re-write.
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