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Uktous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Do I use "may, against and to this aim, " correctly?

Hi,

Question1:

Do I use "to this aim, " correctly?

Question2:

Do I use "may" correctly?

Question3:

Do I use "against" correctly?

Sentence:

I am seeking an opportunity to join an employer who can benefit from my expertise. To this aim, I have attached my CV for your review against any entry-level positions you may have.

thanks
  

Top answer

The attitude is misguided; it is pompous, uktous - especially for someone seeking an entry-level position. I am seeking an opportunity to use my expertise in a challenging assignment, and I have attached my CV in application for any entry-level positions you may offer.

— Mister Micawber

  • The attitude is misguided; it is pompous, uktous - especially for someone seeking an entry-level position.
  • I am seeking an opportunity to use my expertise in a challenging assignment, and I have attached my CV in application for any entry-level positions you may offer.
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The attitude is misguided; it is pompous, uktous - especially for someone seeking an entry-level position.


I am seeking an opportunity to use my expertise in a challenging assignment, and I have attached my CV in application for any entry-level positions you may offer.
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Hi,

I split your sentence into 2 sentences.

I am deciding whether I should use in view of that or in view of this.

which one is more suitbale?

I am seeking an opportunity to use my expertise in a challenging assignment.

In view of that / this, I have attached my CV in application for
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You have reached that dangerous stage in language learning, uktous, where you have learned too many phrases and now want to use them everywhere. Though I like the idea of 2 sentences, those phrases make the second sentence turgid. Simply do this:

I am seeking an opportunity to use my expertise in a challenging assignment. I have attached my CV in application for any entry-level
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