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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Do I need to change anything about this?

As the plane starts shaking, Rick gets out of his seat and starts running up and down the aisle. Another passenger trips him, causing him to fall. Rick gets back to his feet and staggers on, disappearing down the aisle towards the front of the plane.


Do I need to change anything about this?

  

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anonymous As the plane starts shaking, Rick gets out of his seat and starts running up and down the aisle. Another passenger trips him, causing him to fall. Rick gets back to his feet and staggers on, disappearing down the aisle towards the front of the plane.

  • anonymous As the plane starts shaking, Rick gets out of his seat and starts running up and down the aisle.
  • Another passenger trips him, causing him to fall.
  • Rick gets back to his feet and staggers on, disappearing down the aisle towards the front of the plane.
  • That is all correct English.
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anonymousAs the plane starts shaking, Rick gets out of his seat and starts running up and down the aisle. Another passenger trips him, causing him to fall. Rick gets back to his feet and staggers on, disappearing down the aisle towards the front of the plane.

That is all correct English.

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