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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Do I need the comma after 'and' and before 'in'?

Sensing his power, many Black Robes in the Dark Queen’s service sent to stop the intruders magically fled, and, in perhaps his most significant display of power, Raistlin cast a spell that reversed time and brought Tasslehoff back to life after the kender’s fatal encounter with a trapped lock.
  

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The punctuation is correct, however I would definitely consider splitting the sentence into two sentences.

  • The punctuation is correct, however I would definitely consider splitting the sentence into two sentences.
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The punctuation is correct, however I would definitely consider splitting the sentence into two sentences.

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