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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
Do I need a comma here?
your 'theory' on life had too many holes to be taken seriously, which is why everybody attacked you, with the hopes that you would think a little harder before posting such a vapid 'theory'.
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Hi, your 'theory' on life had too many holes to be taken seriously, which is why everybody attacked you, with the hopes that you would think a little harder before posting such a vapid 'theory'. I would omit the second comma and use a pronoun instead of repeating the noun 'theory'. If you'll permit me to comment, you are concerned about commas but you do not seem to be concerned about capital letters.
- Hi, your 'theory' on life had too many holes to be taken seriously, which is why everybody attacked you, with the hopes that you would think a little harder before posting such a vapid 'theory'.
- I would omit the second comma and use a pronoun instead of repeating the noun 'theory'.
- If you'll permit me to comment, you are concerned about commas but you do not seem to be concerned about capital letters.
- Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
your 'theory' on life had too many holes to be taken seriously, which is why everybody attacked you, with the hopes that you would think a little harder before posting such a vapid 'theory'.
I would omit the second comma and use a pronoun instead of repeating the noun 'theory'.
If you'll p
your 'theory' on life had too many holes to be taken seriously, which is why everybody attacked you, with the hopes that you would think a little harder before posting such a vapid 'theory'.
I would omit the second comma and use a pronoun instead of repeating the noun 'theory'.
If you'll p
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