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Persian Learner Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Do i have any mistake in my writting?
hi
i am very keen to know if i have any mistake in my text which i have just written? specially in using of articles(a,an,the)
here you are:
"many times a lie isn't really a lie but it's told for the sake of politeness or to prevent from destroying relationships.
these kind of lies are called "white lie". studies show that women are more likely to tell the white lies!.
but in the other hand,men are more expected to tell more serious lies.
these serious lies are often told to gain some benefits and it's more common among powerful men.
in this way,it has been clear that when people lie,their blood pressure increases and affects on the lier's behavior like rubbing the nose or covering the mouth by fingers! but it doesn't mean that everybody rub their nose is telling a lie.! "
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the second question:
with the phrase "powerful men" i mean politicians,businessmen and so on..., is it true? does the reader get the right sense?
i am very keen to know if i have any mistake in my text which i have just written? specially in using of articles(a,an,the)
here you are:
"many times a lie isn't really a lie but it's told for the sake of politeness or to prevent from destroying relationships.
these kind of lies are called "white lie". studies show that women are more likely to tell the white lies!.
but in the other hand,men are more expected to tell more serious lies.
these serious lies are often told to gain some benefits and it's more common among powerful men.
in this way,it has been clear that when people lie,their blood pressure increases and affects on the lier's behavior like rubbing the nose or covering the mouth by fingers! but it doesn't mean that everybody rub their nose is telling a lie.! "
___________
the second question:
with the phrase "powerful men" i mean politicians,businessmen and so on..., is it true? does the reader get the right sense?
Top answer
There is a glaring basic error that you have made throughout this passage. Any idea what it is?
- There is a glaring basic error that you have made throughout this passage.
- Any idea what it is?
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There is a glaring basic error that you have made throughout this passage. Any idea what it is?
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Every time I hear : " I am keen to know ", I cringe because it sounds like finger on chalk board to me. Please say: " I 'd like to know ", that sounds more like natural English. The first thing that stood out is the absence of capital letters which are missing at all the right places.
For examples:
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For examples:
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I think it's the absence of capital letters which grammarfreak said! Am i right?
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Thanks For your Helpful Answer.
I would like to know How i can recognize the right place of "the".
I would like to know How i can recognize the right place of "the".
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Persian LearnerI would like to know How i can recognize the right place of "the".In my opinion, it is easier to explain how a computer works than to explain when and where to use "the". I will try to explain it this way. In a nutshell, almost all the public places require "the ", e.g. I am going to the market. Do you need anything? The same is true for
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Wow!! What's an explanation, sir. I really loved the way you explained the use of 'the'. 
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