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Drhsz Posted 19 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

dissolve

the next text is needed a grammar check. the meaning is secondary. I like to ask you to run you eyes over, it's appreciated.



drhsz



I'm / sailing across the sky * and / watching the darkest stars *

o o o * to find you / shine *



soundlessly flying high *and / tasting the finest lies *

o o o * every / night *



somewhere not far away * you're / calling the fear to play *

o o o * every/day *



to dis/solve in the bluest wave * and to / dry in the coldest rain *

o o o * once a/gain *



the / love's lying in ambush *

to / call and hold you now *

while you're / longing for a moment *

you've / never seen and found *

the / death's lying in ambush *

to / get you and kill time *

you will shine in my world *

til I'm / speading in you *

to/ night *



to make a / journey in your cells * look a/round in your heart and spell *

o o o * what's engraved in/ there *



seeing / through your skin and sense * that your / blood's painting red and black *

o o o * all you /have *



deep down in your vein * you're / calling my lust to play *

o o o * every/day *



to dis/solve in your bluest wave * and to / dry in your coldest rain *

o o o * once a/gain *
  

Top answer

Hi, I'm not sure what you want us to do. This seems to be poetry or a song, and it looks OK. Grammar is usually relaxed for such things.

  • Hi, I'm not sure what you want us to do.
  • This seems to be poetry or a song, and it looks OK.
  • Grammar is usually relaxed for such things.
  • You might want to ask yourself if you want more capital letters and periods, and maybe commas.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

I'm not sure what you want us to do. This seems to be poetry or a song, and it looks OK. Grammar is usually relaxed for such things.

You might want to ask yourself if you want more capital letters and periods, and maybe commas.

Best wishes, Clive
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dear clive,

thanks for your comment, it is a song and I'm paid for it, and my english teacher somehow dissappeared in the picturesque budapest.

in hungary the highest level of an english language exam hold many surprises in store even for englishborn creatures. My american friends were a little bit perplexed to read 4 answers to a question. every answers were right, the question
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thanks clive, it's a song and I'm paid for it, and I'm in trouble now, and my english teacher disappeared somehow in the picturesqeu Budapest.

my american friends were perplexed seeing some questions and especially the answers in the highest level of the english language exam test here in hungary. I was told that all the answers were acceptable, the question was wrong. in this situation I
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What is the name of the song? Who sings the song? I just heard the song on the radio but couldn't hear who the artist was. I like the song.

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