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Akyv8774 Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Disneyland and me

I would like to introduce myself. My name is Keita Ishibashi. I am from Fukuoka in Japan. I have a favorite place. It is Disneyland. The place was built by Walt Disney. He said, “Disneyland will never be completed. It will continue to grow as long as there is imagination left in the world.” I was impressed that a place that has been so successful is not yet finished and continues to grow. I want to grow with Disneyland as it continues to grow. So I wanted to continue to grow without setting limits for myself. If you are interested in Disneyland, please give me a shout.

  

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akyv8774 So I wanted to continue to grow without setting limits for myself. Take that part out. Otherwise, your paragraph is okay.

  • akyv8774 So I wanted to continue to grow without setting limits for myself.
  • Take that part out.
  • Otherwise, your paragraph is okay.
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akyv8774So I wanted to continue to grow without setting limits for myself.

Take that part out. Otherwise, your paragraph is okay.

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