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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Disjointed sentence

John is what you and I would identify as an exceptionally ordinary man. His appearance is so, as is his job, house, wife and family.

Does the second sentence follow on naturally from the first? 'His appearance is so' refers to the first sentence.
  

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Anonymous Does the second sentence follow on naturally from the first? No, and it is time to tone down your vocabulary: John is wha t we would consider a very ordinary man: his appearance, his job, his house, wife and family are very ordinary.

  • Anonymous Does the second sentence follow on naturally from the first?
  • No, and it is time to tone down your vocabulary: John is wha t we would consider a very ordinary man: his appearance, his job, his house, wife and family are very ordinary.
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AnonymousDoes the second sentence follow on naturally from the first?
No, and it is time to tone down your vocabulary:

John is what we would consider a very ordinary man: his appearance, his job, his house, wife and family are very ordinary.

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