Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country. Please review my answer and give it a band score if possible. I have taken the IELTS date and only one week to go. Kindly check my writing skills.

Nowadays in search of greener pastures, people have started migrating to developed countries. At the initial stage, people have been struggling with the acceptance of a new culture. However, with time everything gets sorted out. Living and working in foreign nations has both advantages and disadvantages.

Many developed countries offer wide-ranging carrier opportunities for local as well as international graduates. This allows people to search and get jobs in the relevant field, which in turn helps them to fulfill their ambition of living a life with higher standards. Some countries not only provide a better quality of life but also bear the health and educational costs of their people. These days citizens of many developing countries like India, Pakistan, Srilanka, and so on started shifting to developed countries due to limited job opportunities and to live a healthy and serene life.

On the contrary, a majority of people find it difficult to survive initially in a foreign country due to differences in working culture, weather, and language. Most of the time they are not able to bear the daily living expenses of that country and forcefully live workaholic life, which at times invite health issues. For instance, many foreign students studying in universities and colleges are not able to perform well academically due to the imbalance of study and work and end up being stressed.

In conclusion, there is no denying that living and working in foreign Nations invite many troubles in the initial phase but after the experiences of their people's way of living, foreigner's can mold themselves accordingly to live a satisfying life.