Discuss studying abroad

Hi, teacher

Please, show me my mistakes?

Some people said that studying abroad is preferable to domestic studying. There are valid opinions on both views, i will consider now.

On the one hand, people who oppose to studying abroad said that studying in other countries is wast of money . For example, the course abroad is the same in the domestic course, but the tuition fee is more than many times and oversees students must pay bills for foods, accommodations when they live alone in other countries. Furthermore, some people believe that there are a vast array of difference in culture, language. For instance, Vietnamese use chopsticks in the meals and shake hand when they meet someone but other coutries do not.

On the other hand, people who support studying abroad point out that studying abroad is a big chance to learn about other cultures, languages and broaden oversees students 's international knowledge. As a result, they can becoming more independent and responsible for cooking, cleaning and of course, they will learn a foreign languege. In additionally, some people believe that studying abroad can open the door to get the better job opportunities with high salary to oversees students when they attend to prestigious university in other countries. Take Vietnam as an example, if two people apply the same job, applicant who is oversees student will be more appreciated than the other.

In conclusion, I personally think that studying abroad is the big chance to change the life as long as people can control this.