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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

discriptive essay

would this be correct grammatically?

" To start with, I prepare my beautiful, silver sparkle, Ludwig, four piece drum set by tuning my toms to a perfect balance of attack and tone, giving the thirteen inch high tom a bright, warm air, and the sixteen inch floor tom a fierce low, rumbling growl, the snare produces a crisp, clear crack and the kick a deep, low-end thump."

commas are not my thing.
  

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commas are not my thing What do you mean they are not your thing? You have put them everywhere! Maybe this site can help you too.

  • commas are not my thing What do you mean they are not your thing?
  • You have put them everywhere!
  • Maybe this site can help you too.
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commas are not my thing
What do you mean they are not your thing? You have put them everywhere!Emotion: rofl

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