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0Japanese police evacuated 34 people from an apartment building Wednesday after a man apparently killed himself by mixing chemicals and inhaling the deadly fumes, the latest in a string of similar suicides nationwide.02br
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00Police said they were called to the scene in Kanazawa City, western Japan, when a resident found a sign on the door of an apartment warning of dangerous gases. 01b00After residents noticed a strange smell coming from the apartment, police moved them to a local community center.02b02br
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00I find the sentence a bit awkward because the two points have little connection.02br
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00What do you think?02br
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00Thanks.0250hrefhttp://edition.cnn.com/2008/WORLD/asiapcf/06/03/japan.suicide.ap/index.html
  

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0I think it is fine, and a logical sequence of events:02br
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001-- The people smelled something strange, so potentially dangerous.02br
002-- So the police moved them to a safer location.0-

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