Disappears into the role of
Hi. I'm writing a script about an actor moonlighting as serial killer.
He stops moving and raises his hands. He then slowly turns around, and as he does 
he disappears into the role of scared homeless man.
1) Do I need "so"? And should there be a comma after it?
2) Is "disappears" natural here?
3) Is the rest OK?
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Hi. I'm writing a script about an actor moonlighting as a serial killer. He stops moving and raises his hands.
- Hi.
- I'm writing a script about an actor moonlighting as a serial killer.
- He stops moving and raises his hands.
- He then slowly turns around, and as he does he disappears into the role of a scared homeless man.
- 1) Do I need "so"?
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Hi. I'm writing a script about an actor moonlighting as a serial killer.
He stops moving and raises his hands. He then slowly turns around, and as he does he disappears into the role of a scared homeless man.
1) Do I need "so"? No
And should there be a comma after it?
2) Is "disappears" natural here?t It's OK. You might also sa
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