Disadvantages of doing part-time job (paragraph)

Doing part-time work has many advantages such as earning money, getting work experience, development of social skills. On the other hand, doing part-time job can influence students in a negative way. Firstly, It can affect the study. You will have a busy schedule and you will get less time for homework. Secondly, as you will have a busy schedule and have less time for yourself, it will affect your health. You will aslo have no time for family and for friends. You will miss out on social contact with peers. Finally, part-time work's salary is too small. Sometimes, students get not good earning so they spend more time for part-time job than the study. Students skip classes, motivating that their job and money they earn are much more significant than the study. To sum up, I think It depends on the person and how they manage their time. So students should have a reasonable plan in order to balance betwwen work and study.
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