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In my opinion, the disadvantage of financing children’s education that it could lead government to indoctrinate infancy brains with propaganda. They could teach and spread false views of history, politics. Moreover they control the citizen’s mindset via teaching them that governments are always right. As a result, they make a society with blind nationalism. North Korea, for example, the government do it, so North Korean can not approach any real information.
In my opinion, the disadvantage of financing children’s education with government money is that it could lead the government to indoctrinate their innocent infancy brains with propaganda. They could teach and spread false views of history and politics. Moreover they would be able to inculcate the belief control the citizen’s mindset via teaching them that governments are always right.
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In my opinion, the disadvantage of financing children’s education with government money is that it could lead the government to indoctrinate their innocent infancy