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Heehaw Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Diner paragraph

Please check for grammatical errors: Small diner on the third floor in a random food building in Ueno. One thing I miss most about Tokyo is even mediocre restaurants like this one dedicate everything to the presentation and taste of their food.
  

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Small diner on the third floor in a random food building in Ueno. (Fragment) One thing I miss most about Tokyo is even mediocre restaurants like this one dedicate everything to the presentation and taste of their food.

— AlpheccaStars

  • Small diner on the third floor in a random food building in Ueno.
  • (Fragment) One thing I miss most about Tokyo is even mediocre restaurants like this one dedicate everything to the presentation and taste of their food.
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Small diner on the third floor in a random food building in Ueno.(Fragment) One thing I miss most about Tokyo is even mediocre restaurants like this one dedicate everything to the presentation and taste of their food.
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AlpheccaStars Small diner on the third floor in a random food building in Ueno.(Fragment) One thing I miss most about Tokyo is even mediocre restaurants like this one dedicate everything to the presentation and taste of their food.
So, if I add the everything else is OK?
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HeehawIs everything else OK?
It seems to me to have several problems. Is it a caption?
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Is it is a caption.
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Fragments are OK as captions for pictures.
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So why does MM say theres still
Problems with the paragraph?
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Small diner on the third floor of in a random food building in Ueno.

If you have a picture, the building is not random; it's a specific place where the photo was taken.
"food building" is not a good phrase. You can use "food court" which is an area in a shopping mall or airport that has many choices of places to eat.
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