) No . You are using ""who" and "when" and two pronouns (they) in the same breath. This is an incorrect (relative) clause construction.
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AnonymousMy colleagues who have been to Japan, when they were in Japan they traveled alone.(Does that imply that they were in Japan at the same time?) No.You are using ""who" and "when" and two pronouns (they) in the same breath. This is an incorrect (relative) clause construction.
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dimsumexpress AnonymousMy colleagues who have been to Japan, when they were in Japan they traveled alone.(Does that imply that they were in Japan at the same time?) No.You are using ""who" and "when" and two pronouns (they) in the same breath. This is an incorrect (relative) clause construction.Try this: My colleagues, who have been to Japan, all traveled alone.