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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

Did the simile used in the following sentence effective?

Did the simile used in the following sentence effective? It's fine, isn't it? If not, what would you suggest to improve it?

That moment he was like a demonic master demanding servitude. I had no choice but to follow his command.
  

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That moment he was a tyrant demanding servitude. I had no choice but to obey his command.

  • That moment he was a tyrant demanding servitude.
  • I had no choice but to obey his command.
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That moment he was a tyrant demanding servitude. I had no choice but to obey his command.
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Wow! That simile sounds better. Grazie mille, Signor Micawber.

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