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Naldo Posted 12 years ago
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Did I write correctly?

Hi, I wrote this for an assignment and I would like to know if I wrote things correctly.

"I love eating food. I have seen many people losing appetite when they are under stress or going on a diet but that never happened to me. I only eat more high-calories-food when I get stressed out. And when I go on a diet, I eat food more vigorously because I work out and it increases my appetite. But now I learned that it doesn't help."

Thanks a million!
  

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"I love eating food. I have seen many people losing know that many people lose their appetite when they are under stress or going on a diet , but that never happened to me. I only eat more high-calorie (no s) -food when I get stressed out.

  • "I love eating food.
  • I have seen many people losing know that many people lose their appetite when they are under stress or going on a diet , but that never happened to me.
  • I only eat more high-calorie (no s) -food when I get stressed out.
  • And when I go on a diet, I eat food more vigorously because I work out , and it increases my appetite.
  • "Thanks a million!
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naldoHi, I wrote this for an assignment and I would like to know if I wrote things correctly."I love eating food.
I have seen many people losing know that many people lose their appetite when they are under stress or going on a diet, but that never happened to me. I only eat mor
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I love eating food.
I'd omit the word 'food'.

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