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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Democracy, although it is a very humanistic ideal—did I use the right term? is not a realistic approach to world governance.
  

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Hi, Democracy, although it is a very humanistic ideal—did I use the right term? is not a realistic approach to world governance. — is not a realistic approach to world governance.

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  • Hi, Democracy, although it is a very humanistic ideal—did I use the right term?
  • is not a realistic approach to world governance.
  • — is not a realistic approach to world governance.
  • In slightly more formal writing, reword as eg Democracy, although it is a very humanistic ideal, is not a realistic approach to world governance.
  • Is 'humanistic ideal' the right term?
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Hi,

Democracy, although it is a very humanistic ideal—did I use the right term? is not a realistic approach to world governance.

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eg Democracy, although it is a very humanistic ideal—did I use the right term?— is not a realistic approach to world governance.
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