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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Did a native speaker write this?

Could you tell me if a native speaker wrote this? Are there any mistakes?

I don't understand the sentences are there mistakes?

Video surveillance system has become as needed one for these days. Due to the theft and vandalism activities in the property it is vital to install the video surveillance system. Both business and home burglaries has become quite increased and pose demand to the solution.

The 10 inch gel memory foam mattress will take the shape and structure of your body and as soon as you get up from the mattress, it will go back to your original size.

Would a native speaker say 'take the shape'?
This mattress takes the shape of the person's body so someone else might not find it comfortable as it has taken the shape of the owner's body.

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No, not written by a native speaker. Mistakes - yes. Just consider the first sentence, for example.

  • No, not written by a native speaker.
  • Mistakes - yes.
  • Just consider the first sentence, for example.
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No, not written by a native speaker.
Mistakes - yes. Just consider the first sentence, for example.
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Hi, Could you help me correct it as I'm having a hard time making it natural?

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Please show us your work so far.

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