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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
diary tenses
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00 Are the tenses for these entries for a day's diary OK? 02 br
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00 Today was the first day of the program. The first place we visited was XXX Palace. As I met other participants, I couldn't help but feel sorry about the sad situations we were in. After hearing some of their sad stories, I really feel how blessed I am to have such a loving family. Hearing their sad life stories has made me aware that I am fortunate to have love of my family day after day. I think this trip is going to change my perspective on life and will let me appreciate the love of my family that I haven't appreciated so much of, 0-
00 Are the tenses for these entries for a day's diary OK? 02 br
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00 Today was the first day of the program. The first place we visited was XXX Palace. As I met other participants, I couldn't help but feel sorry about the sad situations we were in. After hearing some of their sad stories, I really feel how blessed I am to have such a loving family. Hearing their sad life stories has made me aware that I am fortunate to have love of my family day after day. I think this trip is going to change my perspective on life and will let me appreciate the love of my family that I haven't appreciated so much of, 0-
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0 Today was the first day of the program. The first place we visited was *** Palace. As I met other participants, 01 font 00 I couldn't help but feel sorry about the sad situations we were in (paraphrase this sentence) 02 font 00 .
- 0 Today was the first day of the program.
- The first place we visited was *** Palace.
- As I met other participants, 01 font 00 I couldn't help but feel sorry about the sad situations we were in (paraphrase this sentence) 02 font 00 .
- After hearing some of their sad stories, I really feel how blessed I am to have such a loving family.
- Hearing their sad life stories has made me 01 font 00 become 02 font 00 aware that I am fortunate to have love of my family day after day.
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0 Today was the first day of the program. The first place we visited was *** Palace. As I met other participants, 01 font 00 I couldn't help but feel sorry about the sad situations we were in (paraphrase this sentence) 02 font 00 . After hearing some of their sad stories, I really feel how blessed I am to have such a loving family. Hearing their sad life stor
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0 Thank you. 02 br
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00 What I am troubled by is the transition from past to present that started before the sentence with "After hearing ...". Is it correct? 02 br
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00 Your revision: 02 br
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00 Today was the first day of the program. The first place we visited was *** Palace. As I met other participants, 01 font
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00 What I am troubled by is the transition from past to present that started before the sentence with "After hearing ...". Is it correct? 02 br
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00 Your revision: 02 br
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00 Today was the first day of the program. The first place we visited was *** Palace. As I met other participants, 01 font
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0 I didn't see anything wrong. If you feel uncomfortable add "now" at the end of the sentence pr after "I am". 0-
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