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Lucus Ong Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Diary
Hi Teacher!
I wrote this diary just now. I don't know whether this is correct.
Can anyone correct it for me ?
Great Thanks in Advance.
7th July 2010 Driving Lessons
This afternoon, I went to driving centre to practise driving cars. In the car, the teacher kept scolding me for every mistake. I felt very angry. It seemed that his mouth was born to scold others.
After practising driving cars, I practised driving motorcycle. I felt very happy, as it was raining. I signed at three o’clock and five o’clock. Therefore, I would be recorded as having practised for two hours. Even I was taking shelter from rain in a hut and not driving motorcycle.
God Bless You.
I wrote this diary just now. I don't know whether this is correct.
Can anyone correct it for me ?
Great Thanks in Advance.
7th July 2010 Driving Lessons
This afternoon, I went to driving centre to practise driving cars. In the car, the teacher kept scolding me for every mistake. I felt very angry. It seemed that his mouth was born to scold others.
After practising driving cars, I practised driving motorcycle. I felt very happy, as it was raining. I signed at three o’clock and five o’clock. Therefore, I would be recorded as having practised for two hours. Even I was taking shelter from rain in a hut and not driving motorcycle.
God Bless You.
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Hi Lucus; Here are some corrections: This afternoon, I went to the (or "a") driving centre to practise driving cars. In the car, the teacher kept scolding me for every mistake. I felt very angry.
- Hi Lucus; Here are some corrections: This afternoon, I went to the (or "a") driving centre to practise driving cars.
- In the car, the teacher kept scolding me for every mistake.
- I felt very angry.
- It seemed that his mouth was born to scold others.
- After practising driving cars, I practised driving a motorcycle.
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Hi Lucus; Here are some corrections:
This afternoon, I went to the (or "a") driving centre to practise driving cars. In the car, the teacher kept scolding me for every mistake. I felt very angry. It seemed that his mouth was born to scold others.
After practising driving cars, I practised driving a motorcycle. I felt very happy, as it was
This afternoon, I went to the (or "a") driving centre to practise driving cars. In the car, the teacher kept scolding me for every mistake. I felt very angry. It seemed that his mouth was born to scold others.
After practising driving cars, I practised driving a motorcycle. I felt very happy, as it was
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Thanks a lot!
Can you tell me the reason of adding the word "actually"?
In my opinion, the word "actually" is to make the meaning of the sentence more accurately.
However, I wasn't wrong for forgetting to put it.
Am I right?
Can anyone give some ideas on it?
Great Thanks in Advance.
Can you tell me the reason of adding the word "actually"?
In my opinion, the word "actually" is to make the meaning of the sentence more accurately.
However, I wasn't wrong for forgetting to put it.
Am I right?
Can anyone give some ideas on it?
Great Thanks in Advance.
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Lucus, yes, you are right. It is not necessary but makes the sentence read more naturally.
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