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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Diaries correction

I am writing diaries to improve my English.

Could anybody correct it for me because I hope to learn from my mistakes?

Many thanks in advance.

30 NOV 2009 Work Harder!

I hope to study translationg oversea, but I faces two big problem, financial problem and poor English proficience, However, I must not give up. I must work harder, harder, and ever harder. I should study by mysely and look for business opportunity. I believe that if I work hardeer my dream must come true one day.
  

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Lucus Ong 30 NOV 2009 Work Harder! I hope to study translation g oversea, but I face s two big problem s , financial problem and poor English proficience,[ period] However, I must not give up. I must work harder [to achieve my goal], harder, and ever harder .

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  • Lucus Ong 30 NOV 2009 Work Harder!
  • I hope to study translation g oversea, but I face s two big problem s , financial problem and poor English proficience,[ period] However, I must not give up.
  • I must work harder [to achieve my goal], harder, and ever harder .
  • I should study by mysel y and look for business opportunity.
  • I believe that if I work hard eer [comma] my dream [will] must come true one day.
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Lucus Ong30 NOV 2009 Work Harder!

I hope to study translationg oversea, but I faces two big problems, financial problem and poor English proficience,[period] However, I must not give up. I must work harder [to achieve my goal], harder, and ever harder. I should study by mysely and look
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