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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Dialogue check

Hi teachers. Please check my dialogue, does it sound perfectly natural?


Dispatcher: Your cat has gone missing?

Cat lady: Yes. I can't find it. So are you sending someone?

Dispatcher: Okay. You know what? Why don't I just send the whole *** cavalry, huh? How do you like that? I'll send all the cavalry we can muster up.

Cat lady: Okay. Thank you.

Dispatcher: No problem.

  

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It doesn't seem to flow correctly, or as expected. The Dispatcher is being highly sarcastic, but the Cat Lady's reply seems not to reflect this. Or is her reply supposed to be sarcastic too?

  • It doesn't seem to flow correctly, or as expected.
  • The Dispatcher is being highly sarcastic, but the Cat Lady's reply seems not to reflect this.
  • Or is her reply supposed to be sarcastic too?
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It doesn't seem to flow correctly, or as expected. The Dispatcher is being highly sarcastic, but the Cat Lady's reply seems not to reflect this. Or is her reply supposed to be sarcastic too?

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