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Snarf Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Dialogue and Action Query

Is it okay to have the action of a second person after the words and action of a first one in the same paragraph? For example:

“All right.” John starts walking down the hallway. Sol watches him for a moment, shakes his head, snickers, and heads for the door.

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Hi, Yes, if you want to. Clive

  • Hi, Yes, if you want to.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Yes, if you want to.

Clive

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