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Sundarnaz Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Dialogue

Please read through the dialogue and make corrections to the mistakes. Thanks.

A) Do you think she would have married you when she was deeply in love with him.

B) If I had reach her in time, I would have a chance. She wasn't that close to him then as she is now. And I would have the consolation that I had tried for it once. Now it's almost impossible to make her give up on her husband. Even European and Western women do not give up on their husbands even if they don't like them. How, then, can I expect it from an Eastern woman.

A) what about an Eastern man?

B) Why would he when he loves her from the core of his heart.

This short dialogue is based on my personal opinion. You may not think like this but it's OK.

  

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Here are a few suggestions: sundarnaz A) Do you think she would have married you when she was deeply in love with him. This needs a question mark at the end. sundarnaz B) If I had reach her in time, I would have a chance.

  • Here are a few suggestions: sundarnaz A) Do you think she would have married you when she was deeply in love with him.
  • This needs a question mark at the end.
  • sundarnaz B) If I had reach her in time, I would have a chance.
  • She wasn't that close to him then as she is now.
  • And I would have the consolation that I had tried for it once.
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Here are a few suggestions:

sundarnazA) Do you think she would have married you when she was deeply in love with him.

This needs a question mark at the end.

sundarnazB) If I had reach her in time, I would have a chance. She wasn't that close to him then as she is now. And I would have the consolation that I had tried for it

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