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Sundarnaz Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Dialogue
I'm not sure whether you people cheak dialogues written by members or not. But I'm just hoping that my dialogue will be get cheaked. Thanks.
Asma: Mother my friend Salma has participated in Naat competition being held on 2nd of next month.
Mother: That’s good.
A: But mother I think it’s wastage of time.
M: No, Not at all. Co-curricular activities are as important as curricular activities.
A: What are co-curricular activities, mother?
M: Naat competitions, speech, debates, sports etc are co-curricular activities.
A: Why are co-curricular activities important, mother?
M: Co-curricular activities are important because they enhance the mental as well as physical health of students. Participating in these activities develop self confidence in students. Students get aware of their own abilities and talent. They provide a student with an opportunity to express his or her thoughts freely.
A: Then, I did wrong by not participating in these activities.
M: You should participate in these activities. You will enjoy them besides you will learn self-discipline and how to get along with others. You will learn how to try hard to succeed while ready to face adversity.
A: Thanks mother. I will participate in these activities to acquire all these good qualities.
M: That’s my girl.
By Rabia (TG)
Asma: Mother my friend Salma has participated in Naat competition being held on 2nd of next month.
Mother: That’s good.
A: But mother I think it’s wastage of time.
M: No, Not at all. Co-curricular activities are as important as curricular activities.
A: What are co-curricular activities, mother?
M: Naat competitions, speech, debates, sports etc are co-curricular activities.
A: Why are co-curricular activities important, mother?
M: Co-curricular activities are important because they enhance the mental as well as physical health of students. Participating in these activities develop self confidence in students. Students get aware of their own abilities and talent. They provide a student with an opportunity to express his or her thoughts freely.
A: Then, I did wrong by not participating in these activities.
M: You should participate in these activities. You will enjoy them besides you will learn self-discipline and how to get along with others. You will learn how to try hard to succeed while ready to face adversity.
A: Thanks mother. I will participate in these activities to acquire all these good qualities.
M: That’s my girl.
By Rabia (TG)
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Hi Welcome to the Forum. You get more answers if your post is short. I'm going to correct your English.
- Hi Welcome to the Forum.
- You get more answers if your post is short.
- I'm going to correct your English.
- But I'm not going to make it sound more natural, because that would mean bigger changes.
- Clive Asma: Mother , my friend Salma has entered the Naat competition being held on the 2 nd of next month.
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Hi
Welcome to the Forum.
You get more answers if your post is short.
I'm going to correct your English. But I'm not going to make it sound more natural, because that would mean bigger changes.
Clive
Asma: Mother
Welcome to the Forum.
You get more answers if your post is short.
I'm going to correct your English. But I'm not going to make it sound more natural, because that would mean bigger changes.
Clive
Asma: Mother
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Thank you so much sir. you can't imagine how much happy I am with your help. Henceforth I will post shorter texts. Hope you will read me again.
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