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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Diagramming a sentence

Hi,

I was wondering if anyone could check out this diagram and critique it for me. The sentence is: A pain stabbed my heart, as it did every time I saw a girl I loved who was going the opposite direction in this too-big world.

  

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Anonymous Hi, I was wondering if anyone could check out this diagram and critique it for me. The sentence is: A pain stabbed my heart, as it did every time I saw a girl I loved who was going the opposite direction in this too-big world. "check out this diagram"?

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous Hi, I was wondering if anyone could check out this diagram and critique it for me.
  • The sentence is: A pain stabbed my heart, as it did every time I saw a girl I loved who was going the opposite direction in this too-big world.
  • "check out this diagram"?
  • I think you forgot to include the diagram, maybe?
  • CJ
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AnonymousHi,

I was wondering if anyone could check out this diagram and critique it for me. The sentence is: A pain stabbed my heart, as it did every time I saw a girl I loved who was going the opposite direction in this too-big world.

"check out this diagram"? I think you forgot to include the diagram, maybe?

CJ
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