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The diagrams below show the current scheme of a school and the plan of how it will look in 2024. In 2004 there were only 600 students studying there, but by 2024 this number will go up to 1000, hence some expansion is going to be necessary. It is planned that an entirely new, third school building will be built. In addition to that the first two buildings are going to be connected by a corridor with the second building growing ever so slightly. The connection of the corridor will partially destroy a path which leads from the main entrance to the sports field, but that is not a problem as a new road is going to be built leading from the original car park on the western side of the complex to the new car park on the eastern side. Most of these new buildings are going to be built on the site where the sports field currently is almost completely eliminating it.
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The diagrams below show the current scheme of a school and the plan of how it will look in 2024. In 2004,there were only 600 students studying there, but by 2024 this number will go up to 1000; hence some expansion is going to be necessary. It is planned that an entirely new, (no com
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