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Michelangelo was so fasinated by the structure of the human body and his passion for art was so strong that
he devoted so many years to its study.
Q1: Is this sentence correct?
Q2: Is it better to replace the underlined part with the following expressions?
(1) devoted so many years to studying it.
(2) devoted himself to studying it for many years.
Top answer
None of your options are correct. " Additionally, you use "so" too many times. You are saying that he was fascinated by his passion for art.
- None of your options are correct.
- " Additionally, you use "so" too many times.
- You are saying that he was fascinated by his passion for art.
- The rest of the sentence becomes disconnected from the first part.
- Finally,, you are discussing 2 things: his fascination and his passion.
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None of your options are correct.
The word you want is "fascinated." Additionally, you use "so" too many times. You are saying that he was fascinated by his passion for art. The rest of the sentence becomes disconnected from the first part. Finally,, you are discussing 2 things: his fascination and his passion. You should use "their" instead of "its."
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