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Christine Christie Posted 7 years ago
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Is this sentence okay:



"As someone who has lost up to 25kg, I doubt that she will OBTAIN SUCCESS in losing weight this way..."





And how would it be correct to say:



"As someone who has lost up to 25kg, I doubt that she will obtain MUCH SUCCESS in losing weight this way..."

  

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" Your sentences aren't bad, but they're more natural with my amendments.

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Christine Christie"As someone who has lost up to 25kg, I doubt that she will succeed in losing weight this way..."
"As someone who has lost up to 25kg, I doubt that she will have much success in losing weight this way..."

Your sentences aren't bad, but the

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