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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
despicable act
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
Miki Juan, a male Taiwanese, one of the employees of the ryokan, felt ashamed of and angrily condemned their despicable act that had brought shame on Taiwan. He posted the complete shambles on the Facebook, and he believed that this event was simply an individual case. He made an appeal to Taiwanese tourists to conduct themselves with dignity, keep basic rules of etiquette, and maintain cultural standards.
Miki Juan, a male Taiwanese, one of the employees of the ryokan, felt ashamed of and angrily condemned their despicable act that had brought shame on Taiwan. He posted the complete shambles on the Facebook, and he believed that this event was simply an individual case. He made an appeal to Taiwanese tourists to conduct themselves with dignity, keep basic rules of etiquette, and maintain cultural standards.
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I rewrote the paragraph as following. However, why does it capitalize the initial letter R of the word "ryokan," a type of traditional Japanese inn ?
Miki Juan, a male Taiwanese employee of Ryokan, felt ashamed of and angrily condemned their despicable act that had brought shame on Taiwan. He posted the complete shambles on the Facebook, and he
Miki Juan, a male Taiwanese employee of Ryokan, felt ashamed of and angrily condemned their despicable act that had brought shame on Taiwan. He posted the complete shambles on the Facebook, and he
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My apologies. I had no idea what "ryokan" meant. I assumed it was the name of a particular company.
If it's a kind of traditional inn, then you can say:
"Miki Juan, a male Taiwanese worker in a ryokan, ...."
If it's a kind of traditional inn, then you can say:
"Miki Juan, a male Taiwanese worker in a ryokan, ...."
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