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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Desperate help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How do I revise my first paragraph??????
Generally speaking, most illegal immigrants don't deserve health insurance if they don't pay taxes. The reason behind that is because they are here illegally and those who don't work are out-weighing the hardworking U.S citizens who should have the insurance. Whether they pay pay little or no taxes it still doesn't benefit the economy. By the U.S deporting the illegal immigrants it will transform the country into a more wealthy economy.......
Generally speaking, most illegal immigrants don't deserve health insurance if they don't pay taxes. The reason behind that is because they are here illegally and those who don't work are out-weighing the hardworking U.S citizens who should have the insurance. Whether they pay pay little or no taxes it still doesn't benefit the economy. By the U.S deporting the illegal immigrants it will transform the country into a more wealthy economy.......
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'Help' is not a useful thread title. 'Outweigh' is vague or inappropriate (I'm not sure which) Generally speaking, illegal immigrants don't deserve health insurance if they don't pay taxes because they... S deportation of the illegal immigrants will transform the country into a more healthy...
- 'Help' is not a useful thread title.
- 'Outweigh' is vague or inappropriate (I'm not sure which) Generally speaking, illegal immigrants don't deserve health insurance if they don't pay taxes because they...
- S deportation of the illegal immigrants will transform the country into a more healthy...
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'Help' is not a useful thread title.
'Outweigh' is vague or inappropriate (I'm not sure which)
Generally speaking, illegal immigrants don't deserve health insurance if they don't pay taxes because they...
...The U.S deportation of the illegal immigrants will transform the country into a more healthy...
'Outweigh' is vague or inappropriate (I'm not sure which)
Generally speaking, illegal immigrants don't deserve health insurance if they don't pay taxes because they...
...The U.S deportation of the illegal immigrants will transform the country into a more healthy...
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Anon:
I agree with Mr. M's comments.
I am not disagreeing with your opinions because I respect them, but your logic is weak.
For example, you say that most illegal immigrants don't deserve insurance because they are illegal. This is a circular argument (Similar to " I am alive because I am not dead.")
Also you start talking about health insurance and then switch su
I agree with Mr. M's comments.
I am not disagreeing with your opinions because I respect them, but your logic is weak.
For example, you say that most illegal immigrants don't deserve insurance because they are illegal. This is a circular argument (Similar to " I am alive because I am not dead.")
Also you start talking about health insurance and then switch su
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