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ThombD Posted 5 years ago
Grammar
Desire and love are two completely different things
"Desire and love are two completely different things. Desire is only a temporary excitement and love is a slow peaceful eternity."
–Kazi Nazrul Islam
Is it grammatically correct?
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Largely this is OK. I would put a comma after "slow" and a space after the dash. You could consider a more contrastive word than "and", such as "while" or "whereas".
- Largely this is OK.
- I would put a comma after "slow" and a space after the dash.
- You could consider a more contrastive word than "and", such as "while" or "whereas".
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Largely this is OK. I would put a comma after "slow" and a space after the dash. You could consider a more contrastive word than "and", such as "while" or "whereas".
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