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Mr. Tom Posted 8 years ago
Vocabulary

Deserted and Crowded

Hi

Is the use of deserted and crowded natural here? Any suggestions please?

The KFC in our neighborhood is almost always deserted, but McDonalds is mostly crowded.

Thanks,

Tom

  

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The pairing of the two parts of the sentence is not right stylistically. It should be something more like: The KFC in our neighborhood is almost always deserted, but the McDonalds is almost always crowded.

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  • The pairing of the two parts of the sentence is not right stylistically.
  • It should be something more like: The KFC in our neighborhood is almost always deserted, but the McDonalds is almost always crowded.
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The pairing of the two parts of the sentence is not right stylistically. It should be something more like:


The KFC in our neighborhood is almost always deserted, but the McDonalds is almost always crowded.

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