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Lost Stranger Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Description: Your home.

Bonjour, I have the exercise about describing my home.

It says:

Write a paragraph describing your home.

Include information about:

  • how many rooms there are
  • what the kitchen and living room are like
  • whether there is a garden

Can you check is the next paragraph written correctly?

Recently, I bought the new house, it contains three rooms: the kitchen, the bedroom, and the living room. In the kitchen, I got the oven, the gas-plate, the table and three settings. One of most beautiful places in my house is my garden, there are you can find all kinds of roses, violets, and even chrysanthemums.


Thank you!

  

Top answer

Recently, I bought the a new house . I t contains three rooms: the a kitchen, the a bedroom, and the a living room. In the kitchen, I got the an oven, the a gas-plate, the a table and three settings.

  • Recently, I bought the a new house .
  • I t contains three rooms: the a kitchen, the a bedroom, and the a living room.
  • In the kitchen, I got the an oven, the a gas-plate, the a table and three settings.
  • One of most beautiful places in my house is my garden.
  • There are you can find all kinds of roses, violets, and even chrysanthemums.
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Recently, I bought the a new house. It contains three rooms: the a kitchen, the a bedroom, and the

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Recently, I bought the new house, (comma splice error. Do not join two main clauses with a comma.) it contains three rooms: a kitchen, a bedroom, and a living room.(Use the indefinite article the first time you

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Lost StrangerOne of the most beautiful places in my house

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