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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
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After the dinner he filled the necessary documents for the hotel stay and left. The next day, David got up very early and went out to find a house to live. At about midday, he Just found a house by chance in the borough of ascetics. His Chief came to see the house as well. Ascetics Borough was made up of some five hundred or so timber houses constructed on stone bases two-storey mostly, above the road, nestling round the empty field atop the hill with windows looking to this empty field placed just in the center of the borough. This empty field was a game field for children. On the far right side at the foot of the hill, there was a deep channel with a barred fence along its border. Over this the road crossed by a big Barred Bridge. Far right end of the Game Field to the north, where the stairway patio would slant down till it ended up at the city center. Far left end of the Game Field to the west, another stairway would climb up to the left to attain one of the main streets of Tselaniki called Palace Road. For ascetics borough stood at an old meeting point on roads; an ancient Roman road coming from the high hills of east just before the Game Field would merge into three other roads to become a big high street. And it was this street that named as Palaca Road. A road parting from Palace Road slanted to a level where it merges the Game Field. The name of this road and the Game Field was altogether known as Ascetics. This road by the Game Field would continue till it reached to the far end ahead in the south east; there it would turn to the right and went down as long as seven hundred meters; from there it started to slant down again till it would reach the Barred Bridge. In the Game Field near this road stood the lower part of a large stone mill by a white mulberry tree. However, no one knew when it was placed and who placed it there. in the old days it was used as a mill to make flour from wheat grains but not anymore. The house he found was the fifth one on this road which was almost 300 meters away from the Game Field.
  

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After the dinner he filled out the necessary documents for the hotel stay and left. The next day, David got up very early and went out to find a house to live in . At about midday, he Just found a house just by chance in the borough of ascetics.

  • After the dinner he filled out the necessary documents for the hotel stay and left.
  • The next day, David got up very early and went out to find a house to live in .
  • At about midday, he Just found a house just by chance in the borough of ascetics.
  • His Chief came to see the house as well.
  • Ascetics Borough was made up of some five hundred or so timber houses constructed on stone bases , two-storey mostly, above the road, nestling round the empty field atop the hill with windows looking on this empty field placed just in the center of the borough.
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After the dinner he filled out the necessary documents for the hotel stay and left. The next day, David got up very early and went out to find a house to live in. At about midday, he Just found a house just by chance in the borough of ascetics. His Chief came to see the house as well. Ascetics Borough was made up of some five hundred or so timber houses constructed
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I could not find word to thank you for such a short time reaching me for a help, improving my writing and understanding, most important of all, my ability to convey my message to the mind across.
thanks a lot.
regards
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Thank you very much,
how about this one?
(Fragment!) At the far right end of the Game Field to the north, started a stairway patio and it would slant down till it end up at the city center.
(Rather long sentence!) Ascetics Borough was made up of some five hundred or so timber houses constructed on stone bases, two-storey mostly, above the road, nestling round the empty field ato
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thanks a lot,
but what was wrong with this sentence it is always underlined with green lights, "In the Game Field near this road stood the lower part of a large stone mill by a white mulberry tree." I do not understand.
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At the far right end of the Game Field to the north, started a stairway descended from a patio and it would slant down till it ended up at the city center.

Better:
The front windows of all the houses faced this empty field.

Houses normally have windows on all four sides, or front and back. Only the windows on one side would face the fi
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thank you very much.
regards

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