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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hi, Can someone please proof-read my writing, thank you!

1 Shoutarou finds a little girl in the middle of the night near the convenience store. However, he does not know her name or where she lives.
2. Sakurako and Shoutarou went into the mountains where they find a corpse. Shoutarou finds out that the corpse belonged to his classmate’s grandmother.
  

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Your Japanese transcription is old-fashioned, and corpses do not belong to people: 1 Shotaro finds a little girl in the middle of the night near a convenience store. However, he does not know her name or where she lives. 2.

  • Your Japanese transcription is old-fashioned, and corpses do not belong to people: 1 Shotaro finds a little girl in the middle of the night near a convenience store.
  • However, he does not know her name or where she lives.
  • 2.
  • Sakurako and Shotaro go into the mountain s, where they find a corpse.
  • Shotaro discovers that it is the body of a classmate’s grandmother.
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Your Japanese transcription is old-fashioned, and corpses do not belong to people:

1 Shotaro finds a little girl in the middle of the night near a convenience store. However, he does not know her name or where she lives.

2. Sakurako and Shotaro go into the mountains, where they find a corpse. Shotaro discovers that it is the
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Thank you so much, Mister Micawber.

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