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0James was so excited about the victory, he wrapped his arms around Mary 's waist02br
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00I'm trying to describe the action above, asuming her hair let down and in the air.Is the description clear and logical?Thanks!030src#rrlryd4hbwqjdtt.jpgw500h472ohttp://farm1.static.flickr.com/6/8499076_33b6e48bb6.jpg
  

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02font 02br 02br 00I'd avoid 'her haid on ends'. It's clumsy and unnatural. 02br 02br 01font 00Perhaps00 sending her legs swinging in the air and her hair 01i 01u 00flying around02u 02i 00.

— Clive

  • 02font 02br 02br 00I'd avoid 'her haid on ends'.
  • It's clumsy and unnatural.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00Perhaps00 sending her legs swinging in the air and her hair 01i 01u 00flying around02u 02i 00.
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0Hi,02br
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01font00James was so excited about the victory, he wrapped his arms around Mary 's waist02br
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0It's just an example image. Thanks for the correction. 0-
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