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Describing the charts

when we observe the first chart below about ‘Japanese tourists traveling abroad’ we can conclude that the number of Japanese traveling cross-border increases over time. Besides, the percentage of Japanese described by the second chart presenting people coming to Australia is also larger over year although it did decrease in some short period.
It could say that the more country becomes wealthy the more traveling demand of citizen become massive. In 1985, when the Japanese still a developing country, the demand for people about traveling abroad was low, in the whole year the total of people going abroad was nearly 4.5 million. In comparison to the peak year 1995, total people traveling was approximately triple. It also could be said in 1989 and few years before had numbers traveling abroad smaller than 10 percent that in this period the common of traveling and international transportation was lower than other years.
An increase in numbers of people traveling is a drag on an increase in the market share of Japanese tourists in Australia. It is obvious that when the number of Japanese was lowest in 1985 would lead to the percentage coming to Australia is lowest – just reached 2 percent. According to the second chart, we also can see there were two periods that the percentage drastic increase 1985 to 1988 and 1989 to 1993.

  

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