Describing my partner

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Describing my partner



Khalid Ali, my best classmatem, and he is also my friend. The first time i met him was in the last summer. We live in the same country which is . He is older than me, He is 21 years old. He is single. He was born in , which is the capital city. He has five brothers, and He is the older one. He lives in . He studies in at . He is studying English as a second language, than he will go to college. His major is finance. When he graduates from college, he will go back to .



He is very good looking. He is thin, tall, has long face, curly hair, black eyes, a straight nose, and he is handsome. He is sympathetic, smart, calm, loyal, trustful, brave, respectful, and outgoing. He does not get mad very easily, he has a kind heart. He likes to communicate with people. He is helpful, caring, and honest. He's got a fantastic sense of humour and he always makes me laugh. He has a great sense of style, so he always looks well-dressed even in casual clothes. He is a good student, he always do his home works and get good grade.



In his free time, he likes to watch movies, play soccer, fishing, play volleyball, hung out with his friend, read books, and he loves to travels, he has been in many countries. He went to Nottingham, , Liverpool, Great Yarmouth, French, Egypt, United Arab Emirate, Syria, Malaysia, Thailand, and . And he was studying in for eight months.



He has been worked in many companies, such as Nissan, which is a big company for sell cars. He had the opportunity to involve in Lexus Company. He has been working as assistance for the people who comes to perfume “Al hajj”, which is the Fifth pillar of Islam. He worked as a salesman in British brand, which is called Next.