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CP14 Posted 11 years ago
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Describing a graph

How do you feel about this sentences? Topic: Age Distribution in a company

The amount of male employees between 19 and 30 years is with 54.5% surprisingly high.

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No. 5% of the total. This is a surprisingly high proportion.

— Clive

  • No.
  • 5% of the total.
  • This is a surprisingly high proportion.
  • 5 % of employees are males aged 19 to 30.
  • Clive
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eg Male employees between 19 and 30 are 54.5% of the total. This is a surprisingly high proportion.
eg A surprisingly high 54.5 % of employees are males aged 19 to 30.

Clive
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