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Describe your house (paragraph)

A peaceful enviroment ,the living room.it's the place where i spend the best time with my family.the largest corner in my house, and the most beautiful place.it's decorated with beautiful paintings, over looking the front of the house through a window that is covered by a curtain of finest clothes, blocking the sun's rays from us. My mother perfumed it with the smell of incense.

  

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1- You've described the living room, not the entire house. 2- Please write clear and standard sentences. Do not try to write complex ones.

  • 1- You've described the living room, not the entire house.
  • 2- Please write clear and standard sentences.
  • Do not try to write complex ones.
  • 3- I've had to split this post from an existing thread.
  • In future, please do not tag your text to other people's threads.
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1- You've described the living room, not the entire house.

2- Please write clear and standard sentences. Do not try to write complex ones.

3- I've had to split this post from an existing thread. In future, please do not tag your text to other people's threads. Start a new thread for your question/writing.

4- Revise and repost your paragraph below if you wish.

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