Describe your house (paragraph)

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I'm a first year college student. Unlike other students, they have to move away from home and live and study independently. Finding out an ideal accommodation for yourself can be very difficult. It's so convinient because my school is near my house. The house is quite large and comfortable. It has 3 floors and a terrace roof. There is a garden between the garage and the house. My mother aslo make a terrace vegetable garden on the roof top. That makes the house more green. The house has enough room for our daily activities. There are 8 rooms in the house: one living room, one TV room, one kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. Despite living with my parents but I don't rely on them. I can take care of myself. The family support is a strong advantage to me, helps me alleviate difficulties, especially that freshman year.

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AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

I'm a first year college student. Unlike other students, they (Who are "they"?) have to move away from home and live and study independently. (This sentence is a non-sequitur. It has no relation to your first sentence about your being a first-year student.) Finding out an ideal accommodation for yourself can be very difficult. It's so convinient because my school is near my house. (This sentence is another non-sequitur. What does your school being near your house have to do with the difficulties of finding an ideal place to live?)) The house is quite large and comfortable. It has 3 floors and a terrace roof. There is a garden between the garage and the house. My mother aslo make (wrong form, wrong word) a terrace vegetable garden on the roof top. That makes the house more green. The house has enough room for our daily activities. There are 8 eight rooms in the house: one living room, one TV room, one kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. Despite living with my parents but (But is a coordinating conjunction. Use it to join two main clauses. ) .I don't rely on them. I can take care of myself. The family support is a strong advantage for to me, (comma splice error, missing word) helps me alleviate difficulties, especially ~~that~~ in my freshman year.

Anonymous · Answer

My friend house, if I go in very big hall, three bedroom on left side, dining room and kitchen is on right side and end of there is house balcony. In living room has sofa opposite TV set, one coffee table is there. My friend bedroom has one bed near to window, one study table, beside is book shelf.

Class walk 952 · Answer

My house is very beautiful and big which has a living room, a sitting room, a kitchen, one master bedroom with attached bathroom, another bedroom without bathroom and dining hall. Moreover there is a big all in the middle of the house which consists of a big green carpet, thirty two inches television, convenient sofas and many flower pots.

Anonymous · Answer

My favorite friend, Hadeel, has four qualities. First, always help me when I need something. Secondly, she love listening to me. I also love to listen to her. Third, she is very nice and beautiful, and she always visits me every time. If we come watch a movie or dance. And fifth we have the same talent drawing. To sum up, she is her best friend and best friend I met her

Anonymous · Answer

My favorite friend, Hadeel, has four qualities. First, always help me when I need something. Secondly, she love listening to me. I also love to listen to her. Third, she is very nice and beautiful, and she always visits me every time. If we come watch a movie or dance. And fifth we have the same talent drawing. To sum up, she is her best friend and best friend I met her

Pen walk 2004 · Answer

hello My name Is Inas

I live in house .It oujda city

my house there are 5bedroom and garage and ....................

In the bathroom there are bed ......

Papaya cpu 286 · Answer

My home is located in new delhi on arya samaj street.

I live in a magnificent house as you enter you will see an elegant formal living room. Attached to which is our stylish and chic family dining room. I have three graceful and fancy bedrooms with the master bath on one side and the other two bedrooms on the opposite side of the house

There are curtains throughout the house.

The entire house is painted in a light cream tint bringing in the required brightness and airness. "

I share my house with three more members besides me. My loving mom and my motivating father and my younger sibling. They are the sole reason of my being

Pen apple 497 · Answer

My home is located in Bandra on Carter Road. I live in a magnificent row house, which flaunts a small yet dainty garden at the entrance to my home. As you enter you will see an elegant formal living room attached to which is our stylish and chic family dining room. Adjacent to our munching area is a healthy kitchen that is a fashionable open one. We have three graceful and fancy bedrooms with the master bath on one side and the other two bedrooms on the opposite side of the house. There are translucent curtains running throughout the house and the entire house is painted in a light cream tint bringing in the required brightness and airiness."

"I share my house with three more members besides me. My loving mother, my motivating father, and my mischievous sibling. They are the sole reason of my being and what I have made out of my life today. They complete my home and me."

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